My Baby my love - a poem

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By shimmering Dawn

mother and child Bonnie Freireich
mother and child Bonnie Freireich

My baby, my love



To you, my baby, my love,
How can you ever be far from me?
I have held you in my arms,
From the very day you were born,
I carried you in my heart and womb,
How could I leave you to your gloom?
My baby, my love!

Would you let me into your world?
Of disappointments, pain and hurt,
I cannot promise to erase it all,
But I could wipe the tears when they fall,
I could give you of all I have in me,
To love you, with a love so pure,
To comfort you until you feel secure,
My baby, my love.

Do not think you have grown too big,
You could still use some love,
I can teach you to leave your pain behind,
And trade them for some feelings kind,
Drain out all the bitterness in you,
Until you have no more,
Let me carry some of your burdens child,
My baby, my love!

Would you give me your hands?
So I could hold them safely in mine.
Could you give me of your heart?
I would never decline,
Would you give me of your thoughts?
I would learn to love you more,
Your happiness is all I want,
My baby my love..

Your pains, your troubles, hurt me more,
And I want you to know,
That there is someone always waiting here,
Close by and very near,
Just lean on me and do not fear,
Believe that everything will be alright,
I am with you my precious child,
My baby, my love.

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lord de cross 5 months ago

Horrendously in shock shimmering. That baby in your arms won't fear nothing and will be so close to feel your heart and your..warm loving.

Lord

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chicagoguy Level 2 Commenter 5 months ago

Believe that everything will be alright,

I am with you my precious child,

My baby, my love. !! loved your poem !! voted up

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Phoebe Pike Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Such a sad poem... beautiful, but it leaves my heart aching.

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nyanyicute 5 months ago

so touching

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

That is a comforting thought ...I believe... Thank you Lord de cross for the comment and comforting words :) Shalom!!

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

Chicagoguy, thank you for your kind words... and voting it up... let your day be blessed ! Shalom!

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

Phoebe, It isn't sad...but children do get greatly disappointed with little things and as a mother it breaks your heart to see them that way... I know and I believe all is well... Thank you for feeling the pain with me. Shalom!

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

Nyanyicute thank you ... God Bless you. Shalom!!

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Beautiful, beautiful!! The picture is so lovely..Thank you..Cheers

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Docmo Level 6 Commenter 5 months ago

Would you let me into your world?

Of disappointments, pain and hurt,

I cannot promise to erase it all,

But I could wipe the tears when they fall,

Unforgettable words. such a beautiful bequest to a child, any child. I love these words very much indeed and brings such emotions as a child and as a parent. Well written, wonderful.

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pstraubie48 Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

being a Mother is at once awesome and heart-wrenching ...you thoughts express what many may have felt in their interactions with their babes....and then the babes grow up and understand....thanks for sharing these words expressed with tenderness and passion...

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

Dear AE, Thanks for those beautiful words :) Shalom!!

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

Docmo, Wonderful to see you back . It just breaks my heart to see pain... and not being able to do anything about it... just biding my time :) Thank you for your sweet words .. Peace :)

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

Pstraubie, You say it so well my dear, thank you for kind words. I sincerely appreciate that. God Bless and Shalom!!

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

The poem so beautiful the picture perfect.

Wonderful writing and voted up

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ExoticHippieQueen Level 6 Commenter 5 months ago

A parent's love for their child (in most cases) is an unconditional love, even in the worst of situations and times. Very beautifully expressed and unique. Voted up and beautiful.

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

MM, Thank you for your kind words, I loved the sculpture the moment I set eyes on it... Glad you liked it..

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 5 months ago

EHQ,Thank you, it is true that oftentimes the love of a parent is unconditional no matter what happens. Thank you for your appreciation and your votes.. Shalom!

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sammyx360 3 months ago

love in a form of words, what can i say more , truly beautiful , why it is not 100 point yet ? not fair at all :D

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shimmering Dawn Hub Author 3 months ago

Sammyx360, That is flattery! Thanks and I appreciate that very much... That was written for my son who was going through a touch patch, mother's love...can there be any flaw! Have a blessed day! Shalom!

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